{"id":620,"date":"2012-03-24T02:52:19","date_gmt":"2012-03-24T02:52:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/?p=620"},"modified":"2012-03-24T02:52:19","modified_gmt":"2012-03-24T02:52:19","slug":"part-15-sf-in-sa-15-on-writing-the-other-with-zandile-mahlasela-march-2012","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/?p=620","title":{"rendered":"Part 15 &#8211; SF in SA 15 &#8211; On Writing the &#8216;Other&#8217;, with Zandile Mahlasela (March 2012)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">It took me <b>Nick Wood<\/b> a good few years before I plucked up the courage to write the &#39;Other&#39;, i.e. to me, someone who was not white and male. I firstly wrote as a &#39;white woman&#39; in <i>God in the Box<\/i> &#40;2003&#41;, set in an increasingly familiar London. Phew&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;that was picked up, published in the British science fiction magazine <i>Interzone<\/i>&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;and I wasn&#39;t scorned as a &#39;sexist impostor&#39;! The leap to crossing the &#39;colour&#39; divide took a bit longer for me though&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;part of my fear was that, given South Africa&#39;s history, it would be seen as a form of colonisation of experience. Then, one day, I sat down and thought long and hard about it.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Slowly, a series of thoughts dawned. In not writing about characters of colour, I was in essence deleting them from my stories, replicating an apartheid mindset. Furthermore, I was holding on to an implicit internalised belief that perhaps the &#39;gap&#39; between us was so large, I would get it completely and catastrophically &#39;wrong&#39;. Again, apartheid had taught us that the &#39;racial&#39; gap was an unbridgeable chasm&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;which in essence meant we needed to be kept apart.  I realised with some degree of horror that, in excluding characters of &#39;colour&#39; in my writing, I had thus been&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;at least partly&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;colluding with an apartheid mindset. <\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">So in 2004 I wrote about &#39;Kerem&#39; in <i>The stone chameleon<\/i> &#40;Young Africa imprint; Maskew Miller Longman&#41;, a so-called &#39;coloured&#39; character in a futuristic Cape Town. The book &#39;passed&#39; the test read of several selected township readers. Phew again&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;but this time, I knew it was right to write about the Other&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;as long as it was with respect. Further, as long as I checked the voices I was using with someone from within that culture&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;and if the characters felt &#39;right&#39; for that particular story.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">I eventually came across <b>Nisi Shawl<\/b> and <b>Cynthia Ward&#39;s<\/b> &#40;2005&#41; book on <i>Writing the Other<\/i>, which has also proved a useful tool. However, even in that book, there was what sounded like an inauthentic white South African character&#39;s voice included in a story excerpt. The book itself uses an acronym&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;&#39;ROAARS&#39;&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;which covers what the authors see as central potential areas of difference to be considered in your characters, i.e. Race, &#40;sexual&#41; Orientation, Age, Ability, Religion and &#39;Sex&#39; &#40;gender&#41;: <a href=\"http:\/\/booklifenow.com\/2010\/03\/nisi-shawl-and-cynthia-ward-on-roaars-and-the-unmarked-state\/\" target=\"_blank\">http:\/\/booklifenow.com\/2010\/03\/nisi-shawl-and-cynthia-ward-on-roaars-and-the-unmarked-state\/ <\/a>. <\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">As a South African, I think class and culture are additional important considerations too. I don&#39;t know what it&#39;s like now, but when I was at &#40;then an all-white&#41; school, there was an acute awareness about the relative wealth of where people came from. This was such, that there was overt snobbery shown towards perceived &#39;poorer&#39; whites, coming from a less affluent nearby white suburb in Cape Town.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><b>Lauren Beukes<\/b> wrote a great guest blog on <i>Writing the Other<\/i> for <a href=\"http:\/\/worldsf.wordpress.com\/2011\/04\/27\/guest-blog-lauren-beukes-on-writing-the-other\/\" target=\"_blank\">The World SF Blog<\/a>. I&#39;m not going to repeat it, you can read it for yourself, but one of the points that particularly resonated with me was her idea that anyone you write about is &#39;Other&#39;. That is, at some level, we are all &#39;Other&#39; to each other&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;and one way to bridge that &#39;gap&#39; of difference is to ask.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">There has also been some interesting genetic-cultural research which suggests that in certain places, variation within cultures is much wider than variations across cultures&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;i.e. we may be more different to someone we perceive as similar to ourselves, than someone we see as completely different. Also, perhaps not surprising given Africa as the &#39;cradle&#39; of humankind, variation within Africa is wider than variations in the rest of the world combined; Africa is indeed the original and the richest, most subtle &#39;stew&#39; of people.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">So, although I stand partly outside now, I am still proud to be &#40;South&#41; African&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;and to continue to write stories about where I come from, trying ever harder to get them to reflect the richness of the people there\/here. When I anxiously handed my story <i>Of Hearts and Monkeys<\/i> to an amaXhosa reader, <b>Zandile Mahlasela<\/b>, I had an irrational fear it would be full of inaccuracies, because I was no longer resident in South Africa. I was extremely relieved when <b>Zandile<\/b> eventually replied that it was fine. I asked her what the process had been like for her&#58;<\/p>\n\n<table id=\"tablepress-24\" class=\"tablepress tablepress-id-24\">\n<tbody>\n<tr class=\"row-1\">\n\t<td class=\"column-1\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"images\/spacer.gif\" width=\"12\" height=\"1\" border=\"0\" \/><\/td><td class=\"column-2\">&quot;Well, for me, what caught my attention in the story was the fact that a male WHITE writer thought about the issues normally thought about by black population. The content of the story is really amazing, I must say. Upon request to look at the story, many things came to mind, I was nervous, excited and yet anxious to begin with it, I thought to myself, this challenge I have to take. I did not know what feedback I will get back from the writer though, hence the nervousness:&#41;. At the end, the story turned out to be exciting. Again, for me, this has been a great life experience, it gave me hope that, I, one day shall write my own book.&quot;<\/td><td class=\"column-3\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"images\/spacer.gif\" width=\"12\" height=\"1\" border=\"0\" \/><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<!-- #tablepress-24 from cache -->\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">This cultural consultation around &#39;Of Hearts and Monkeys&#39; has been a good experience for both of us it seems, although we were both also obviously anxious about the process! I also know that I <b>Nick Wood<\/b> will always need a cultural adviser or editor. I am thrilled to have an amaZulu psychiatric nurse reading my current work in progress, a book set in Kwa-Zulu Natal&nbsp;&#45;&nbsp;chunks of it in a psychiatric hospital familiar to us both, although she <b>Busisiwe Siyothula<\/b> has a much more current and ongoing experience of it, which will be interesting indeed. I know I will have lots of stuff to correct, but it&#39;s all great learning experience too.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Finally, on the dangers of Internet translations and cultural-linguistic context. I consulted a Zimbabwean of Shona heritage about a short story I&#39;d written recently. &#39;All fine,&#39; he said, &#39;But why on Earth have you got your main character saying in Shona: &quot;Oh, excrement!&quot;&#39;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: left;\">&#39;I was trying to making her swear,&#39; I said lamely, to his laughter. <\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: left;\">He gave me a much better word. Duzvi&#33; I have to finish now.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: left;\">&copy;  2012 Nick Wood and Zandile Mahlasela<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/?attachment_id=105\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-105\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/wp-content\/uploads\/vlinec.png\" alt=\"\" title=\"vlinec\" width=\"140\" height=\"10\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-105\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>On Writing about (perceived) &#8216;Differences&#8217;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-620","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-sfsa"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/620","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=620"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/620\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=620"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=620"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/nickwood.frogwrite.co.nz\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=620"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}